我的生日

Posted on December 23, 2006 by 二小姐

有些无奈；有些疲惫；有些幸福

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3 Responses to 我的生日

  1. Jon says:
    December 23, 2006 at 9:28 pm

    少了一个标点。

  2. 铁甲 says:
    December 23, 2006 at 10:54 pm

    我觉得应该用分号。

  3. harsh says:
    December 26, 2006 at 1:32 pm

    。补个标点

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